The 2 last days of our holidays. by chinedu
March 28, 2008
It was morning and we all woke up. After that we did what we usually always do (I hope you haven’t forgotten). Then we went across the bridge to Itaewon, down near the bank and parked in the parking lot. I noticed that we were going on a cruise. We got out of the car and went down on this medium steep step (I was carrying Joel). We went down and got our ticket in the lunch bar (I suppose), we were leaving by three forty five, and well we had a lot of time. So we let Joel and Shawn walk freely. While me and my dad followed each of them behind. The time came and my dad followed each one behind. The time came and we went outside (it was raining), with everyone who came with us at the same time. The boat had two floors; we went up and found a seat. When everyone was ready there was an announcement that we were going on a cruise for an hour and there is going to be a stop. So the boat started moving we saw different bridges and why they were built. We stopped and saw some more bridges. The boat turned back to the lunch bar, entered our car and went to eat dinner at our favorite restaurant. We crossed the bridge and entered Seoul. We headed for our hotel and did what we usually do.
March 30, 2008
It was morning and everyone woke up, we usually did what we do, except that everyone was packing. We were leaving the hotel today and everyone was packing was the same way we did has we left our apartment in Ulsan. When we finished packing, we all went to the reception room and gave the card to the service helper. They took the card and we went down, into our car (with the luggage that my dad already packed, while we were packing). My dad drove us to a church and we met one of my dads friend. He took us to the church and told us to have a seat. A nice man took our coats and hanged them carefully. As we sat, everyone started singing, the pastor preached, we did offering and then church was over. As we got into our car. We told everyone in Itaewon and Seoul goodbye, and then we headed for the gate of Seoul. Then we were on our way to our home in Ulsan
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Posted By 
tyna 
May 12, 2008 
Chinedu-scopido is a real dream catcher.His experiences during the easter spring holiday was interestingly interesting.He’s too summarized and brief.I love his report,smart guy indeed.Keep it up man.Which month were your born?.I presumed u’re taurus.Cheers.
He doesn’t like anything to stress him,so why not summarise to get out of mom’s trouble?
nice scanty piece of prose…
very good efforts. keep it going the more!
I think Chinedu is trying to come up with a new kind of poetry titled “…We did what we usually do…”
Nice work lad, keep up the good work!
I think he mentioned you in his new one,i will post it today.